Dear God, can you please do me a favor?
By unifying all mankind’s behavior
Please delete all manmade religion
For you that should be a simple decision
By worshiping only you alone all mankind can then atone
Author notes
Photo of my wifes painting . .
A contest entry
- 5 Lines for God by Perennial Plague.
475 points, ended November 9, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Love it, find the real God, not the false God made by the imaginations of sometimes wacky men. Congratulations on the HM, I think this must have been a hard contest to think about because there's so much to choose from when 'talking' to God.
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I agree wholeheartedly with every concise word. I know God hears your prayer my dear friend and someday the lion will lie down with the lamb. Someday we will all know who is the Master of the Universe. I had to chuckle at the simplicity because we know that God is capable of deleting all man-made religion. Exceptional! I wish you the best in the contest.
Much Love Always ♥
Renee
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I could not agree with you more. Line number three is most compelling though. Short but powerful. Wonderful!
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I especially liked line three.
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Very beautiful thoughts and words....so selfless.
Very well done.
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This is great!!! Now I'm having a freakin' hard time judging the entries. I especially love the first three lines of this piece. That's quite a nice painting btw.
Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest. XD
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