Autumn rain pours down
robin shivers on a branch
forecast warned of snow.
A contest entry
- first day of rain---- by Purush.
600 points, ended November 20, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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a vivid visual,
shivering red-breast
readying for winter!
Well cone!!
M-C
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A chill ran through the air while reading this poem. Nice write and best of luck in the contest with this.
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love this haiku. 2nd line is very vivid visual image. Can see it in my minds eye as if I were standing on my porch looking out at my own yard. I only wish my forecast called for snow. Hasn't snowed here in a long, long time. Great write Di.
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poor little robin
Excellent Haiku, evokes sounds and sights of autumn..lovely
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these are so deceivingly simple and there is the reason I read these and not attempt to write them
you really understand just how good people are with form poetry like this when you attempt to get the same easy feel and flow as you have achieved here. To say so much with so little is an art form More women should aspire to 
Just kidding I'm in for it now! lol well done masterB
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I imagine the rain before the snow
might of a brisk cold wind on a late autumn day
how are you girl? Hope all is well with you poet
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This is a lovely bit of brevity, Sweetie. Indeed, we will soon be in the greedy grasp of winter once more. I, for one, do not look forward to it. Good luck in the contest, my Friend. 
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all the best in my contest
Autumn rain pours down
robin shivers on a branch
forecast warned of snow.
so chilling and thrilling too
lovely
all the best in my contest
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