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Twisting Fate

NIGHTS OF ALLURE;
There was something in her voice
Maybe it was the whisper of the ocean
Singing for me to run from her glance

SINKING EMOTIONS;
I think it was my heart beating
It could have been the distance
Between my head and my heart

FOLD ME UP;
So torn and unbelievably broken
I should have took the train home
Why did i think i'd be okay?

NOT SO PERFECTLY;
How can i deny her this moment
I knew she'd been waiting there
To catch me in my darkest hour

CAPTURE MY PAIN;
I had a feeling she was hiding
Beneath the shadows of our lies

AGAIN;
So she took my hand and we fell
Into the twisted fate that we made together.

FOR THE LAST TIME;
Fingers Crossed

Author notes

This is about seeing my ex girlfriend everywhere!!! she is haunting me..we had an "ALMOST" relationship..She is engaged and i was her play thing on the side..i fell in love with her and she fell in love with me..but i guess love isn't enough. Well it wasn't enough for her to give him up for me.!!! well thats my story ♥

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  • spiritual wolf
    November 6

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    i really like the twist in the end of this. it had beautiful feelings in it and metaphors that arent so confusing they are hard to understand,and feeling that was blunt but beautifully put