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[ a silence resonates in my ears ]

a silence resonates in my ears
As the poisonous words escaped  rapidly from your mouth.
You're leaving.
And I stand there with not even a word
Staring down at the green carpet.
I want to ask so much,
but I don't know how to say it.
my mouth can't form a single word
as I search for my emotions
looking to find anger.
sadness isn't in sight
No emotions are left.
Emptiness crawls up and under my skin as he gathers his things.
Heartbroken, I say nothing and watch
no desire, no feeling. Just... nothing

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