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There will be a Tomorrow

There will be a tomorrow where the sun will shine brighter than before
Warming up a cold, cold nation
There will be a tomorrow were my children will be able to run free,
No more tears only joy
There will be a tomorrow, where everything will be silent
There will be only love wrapping itself around each one of us
Love not just spoken but seen
There will be a tomorrow where I can touch my brother
At that moment we would share love not hate

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  • faithwhisperer silver member
    November 8

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    I think so too! Love the last line, particularly, "There will be a tomorrow where I can touch my brother, At that moment we would share love not hate." That is one of the great hopes of my soul! Thanks for your beautiful entry!

    faith


  • Beautiful-N-Broken gold member
    November 6

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    This is absolutely amazing and I loved reading this, the hope in it is just seeping off my screen over here. You did wonderful with this and I'd like to say thanks for entering and good luck in the contest!