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chilled wind lots of rain

chilled wind lots of eain
shaking soaked from head to toes
forgot umbrella

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  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    November 15
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    soaked and shaking---
    brr---what feeling you portray!

    M-C


  • Malabu
    November 6

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    hey bill...I see you have a boo boo...rain*
    and I thought second line seemed more a better selection if it read

    soaked head to toe- shaking
    just a suggestion


  • Purush
    November 6

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    All the best in my contest

    chilled wind lots of [eain]
    shaking soaked from head to toes
    forgot umbrella

    rain?
    good
    enthralling
    All the best in my contest