You are my everlasting, and ever-loving Daddy ♥
You are my comforter, shield, rock, fortress and safe place
You are my teddy bear when I am scared, alone and not wanted
You are my best friend in hard times, good times and ALL times
You are my all in all, my life, my source, my light, my EVERYTHING
A contest entry
- 5 Lines for God by Dray I. Disaster.
475 points, ended November 9, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww
This is both beautiful and sweet...
You are my comforter, shield, rock, fortress and safe place
(A very potent line that says quite just about everything. God, indeed, is our protector.)
You are my best friend in hard times, good times and ALL times
(Very very true... Other friends may just be there during good times and they may abandon us during our hard times... but one thing is for sure, God will always be with us... yeah, always.)
You are my all in all, my life, my source, my light, my EVERYTHING
(That says it all. A very nice ending for an equally nice piece.)
Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest. XD
- Dray
(I almost forgot to applaud this lmfao)
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Thank you very much
A comment like that means a lot to me!!!
I've been going through a lot of tough stuff lately and I just have to remember that God is ALWAYS there no matter what...
Definitely wrote this poem from the heart <3 -
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I can tell just by reading your piece that you did write it from the heart. I have to commend you for that. XD
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