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Regal


Clothed in royal fur
with penetrating eyes;
scanning his domain
from beneath the golden boughs

No one can deny his presence
or hope to hide from his gaze;
all are subject to the alpha male
and shake at the proud howl

The pack follows loyally
each taking their given place;
none seizing a chance at deposing
the king of the clan who rules now

Clothed in royal fur
with penetrating eyes;
scanning his domain
from beneath the golden boughs


Words: K.Botka
11/6/09

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Pix prompt: http://allpoetry.com/contest/2465731

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  • Lucian Valcor
    November 6

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    very nice poem you know I didnt get the purpose of what the poem was about until i looked at the picture but now it makes sense i read the whole thing and picture a king looking over his kingdom any way very nice

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  • SamanthaSam gold member
    November 6

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    I really enjoyed the royal fur part:
    Clothed in royal fur
    with penetrating eyes;
    scanning his domain
    from beneath the golden boughs

    Very touching and means a lot to me. You did a wonderful job with imagery and metaphors and flow. Great take on the prompt. Good luck in my contest and have a wonderful night. Thank you for entering.
    Hugs, Sam I Am

    • Wow!

      Something I dashed off before bed for you & it won me a Silver?
      See how far love can go? I'm so glad you liked this. I enjoyed writing it & was surprised at the outcome myself. At first when I saw your contest I wasn't inspired by the pix, but when you gave me a personal invite that made all the difference!