you are so different then I thought
you made me smile when I cried
and you made everything so much more positive
I know it must sound stupid
coming even from me,
but you completed me
I thought I needed the attention
the way you held me
I thought it was right
when you pushed me away
cause I thought I had done something wrong...
I loved you
and I still do...
you were my soul and sun
mixed up greedily into one
I couldn't breathe unless you where there
and the sun always brightened when I looked your way
thats my love story
sad isn' t it?
...
Author notes
I thought I'd write something b4 bed, I heard a song &thought of him...dedicated 2 my ex
11/05/2009
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sometimes you just need to let it all out i guess, strong poem and emotion, kepe it flowing
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Thank u ^_^
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Beautifully sad! It's very difficult when you try so hard
to let go and forget about your past relationship. Sometimes
you do and the smallest thing such as a song, a certain smell,
or even a meal that you once shared is present. It's memories
like these that can turn one of your happiest days upside down.
I hope that you do find someone to help mend your aching heart.
Great work expressing yourself here! Nice to read you again my dear
and take care!
Jeremy0826
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Thanx ^_^
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Lovely flow, niece...sad....There will be someone else...we just get wiser with our experience...a.
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Awww, thank u ^_^
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