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Doubting, my namesake, forgive me.
The things in life lead me astray.
But please, though I wronged you,
I did right in existence.
Repent, repent, repent.

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Things would be strange, considering that I'm athiest...

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  • Beautiful-N-Broken silver member
    November 6

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    This is still a great write. You did wonderful with it. Good luck in your contest hun!! Keep up the great writing, keep smiling always, and good luck in all you do.


  • Dray I. Disaster
    November 6
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    Nice XD.

    Repent, repent, repent!!!!

    Love how you've ended this piece.

    Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest. XD


    - Dray