Free will is not working.
Stop the hatred
Stop the fear
Renew the Love
Someone needs to be in charge down here
A contest entry
- 5 Lines for God by Perennial Plague.
475 points, ended November 9, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
nothing specific do I ask
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LOL! Yes! Can I get an "AMEN"????
Made me smile.
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Amen, Sister!!!
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Ah now this is after my own heart...but I think he wants us to do the changing and take charge, I do hope he has a sense of humor
C
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I seriously don't think He has any wants nor desires for us at all. I don't believe there is a He in that respect, but that is another poem.
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hmmm, this makes me stop and think.
renew love of what? mankind? did He stop loving us?
or did we quit believing Him when He tried to show us?
Im on the fence as far as religion goes. I know what I've been taught, and led to believe, and then there's what I feel underneath it all, as a child still.
Can a parent stop loving?
I know I get angry enough to threaten to stop loving them, I may even think I can with all my heart. But my heart cannot be made to stop loving once its been convinced to love in the first place. I will perhaps love-and be pretty pissed off enough to flush them down the toilet-but I would never try. Maybe just dip them in to their ears...lol
Okay Jin. Need more coffee, and sugar, it looks like
love to you always,
jin
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Answers to you questions
renew love of man toward man, and man toward anything actually.
No, I don't see that 'He' quit the loving.
Parents who have a difficult time loving themselves can't love their children wholly, other than that pretty much they love children a lifetime.
I have 4 children, all teenagers in the same house , at the same time, believe me I understand you here.
Thanks for the thought provoking commentary questions.
Love,
Buddy
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Well-done.
"Someone needs to be in charge down here."
Quite a provocative ending and a strong one if I may be bold to say so.
Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest. XD
- Dray
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Thank you. . . and you may be so bold, you are the contest holder. Thanks for holding this contest. Good choice.
Buddy
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Great write, Uncle Buddy. Well said. I wish there was more peace and love in this world rather than all the war and hatred going on. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
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Yhanks. It's not much of a poem, but it is 5 lines I would say.
How are you doing? You just caught me on my way out. LOL
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You're welcome. I thought the words you chose were quite powerful.
I've been good. Midterms are over now so I feel a little less stressed, now I'm preparing for the long cold winter. I'm looking forward to the warm spring weather already, though. I don't mind the snow, but the temperature isn't exactly pleasant.
How's life on your end?
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Glad your not as stressed.
We don't get cold like oyu do, but it still sucks. Work is too long days off too short and not enough. Other than that it's ok.
Have a good night, and I'll chat with ya soon.
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