i want to drink in your scent
and wrap my arms around you
and never let you go
dream of me tonight,
promise me infinity
and sway with me
let's dance in the moonlight
and remember those memories
that taste bittersweet
stars fade
in your
sunkissed eyes
you make my heart break
everytime you fall
iyearn.
iwant.
ihate.
ilove.
you.
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summer of 2004
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Very good poem, I enjoyed reading this. Love can be a beautiful thing.
Thanks for entering and best of luck to you in my contest.
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Beautifully passionate; how it must feel to experience a summer love like this, youthful and desirable
Poetically I’d recommend capitalizing your Is
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