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Embracing Warmth

A storm beats upon exterior walls,
as heavy gusts rattle windows ~
taunting, these elements rage

  unceasingly, without mercy.


Inside, cold drafts seep in
through unseen cracks ~
their wraith-like streams
  sending chills over ones' soul.


A wall-mounted furnace ignites,
ushering in embracing warmth,
bringing comfort, solace and rest ~
  until outside torments subside.


Regardless of conditions,
this warmth is readily available ~
all one needs to do

  is reach out,
    and receive its' peace.



Author notes

No prompt, but it is raining hard outside...

For my Love

I have written over 80 poems (at this point) dedicated to my Love ~
most, if not all, were about my love for her. Some spiritual, some
sensual, all loving and adoring...

With this, I wanted something for her soul ~
a comfort, a reassurance that my love's warmth is unconditional,
and that it is always hers, no matter what life throws at us.

Our love can withstand the storms of life

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  • spiritual wolf
    November 6

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    this was well written for one's soul. i love the sense in this and the flow was perfect. the only word i can think of to describe this was soul filling perfect write


  • wave1080
    November 6

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    Beautiful

    This is beautiful brother . I wish to write like you one day


  • OnceUponAMind silver member
    November 6

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    Beautiful!!

    A wall-mounted furnace ignites,
    ushering in embracing warmth,
    bringing comfort, solace and rest ~
    until outside torments subside.


    Your wife is a lucky woman


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    November 5

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    this is the big beautiful platter of goodness,
    waiting to serve people to feast on it richness

    lovely Tim I so adore your writes

    love and blessings

    Rend


    • Xianaria gold member
      November 6
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      Thank you, Rend

      It dawned on me as I was writing, that this is also a spiritual piece.

      While my Love is not my wife, I do love her "as Christ loves the church" ~ I love and desire her in every way, without condition.

      Love & blessings, my Dear Friend ~

      ~ Tim

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