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Vigilant

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lone wolf
under cover
seeks haven for his pack
ever-so-alpha vigilant
leader

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Cinquain
2, 4, 6, 8, 2 syllable count
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  • goalsv
    November 6
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    Very good, a great discription and a great cinquain.


  • SamanthaSam gold member
    November 5

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    Beautiful Cinquain and lovely take on the prompt. You caught in such few words what it looks like he is doing to me too. Very nice imagery and flow. I like Cinquains when written nicely like this. You did the wolf justice. Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest. Have a great night.
    Hugs, Sam I Am


  • Evinde
    November 5

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    I love this short but effective poem. I think it descibes the wolf's expression rather well