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No Man

I don't want a man
but
I want someone to hold

I don't want a man
but
I want someone to talk to

I don't want a man
but
I want date nights

I don't want a man
but
I want jacuzzi and beer time

I don't want a man
but
I want to cry on someone's shoulder

I don't want a man
but I would really like some
company

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  • Gillian-Noelle
    November 29
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    I get the conflict of emotions you are writing about here -been there,done that as they say!
    I like how simple the words and structure are and also how relatable the piece is.Nice poem.

  • JToddUnderhill
    November 6

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    Well.....

    ..... i hope you find all of those things and I hope She is all you want in a woman. cause by not wanting a man you are seriously limiting your choices! Good write though


    • ScarsFade
      November 6
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      wow you missed the concept on that one. I am not ready for a relationship with a man but i am lonely that was the concept....vagina is not what i want i have one in my life already i don't need to be in charge of one.

      • JToddUnderhill
        November 6
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        See now...

        ..... That the reason that this is a weird are form, you could write meaning one thing and someone like myself may see it as saying something completely different. I am sorry you are lonely and whish there was something I can do to remedy that for you but I am married and in Colorado so my hands are tied.... but then again that could be fun too


        • ScarsFade
          November 6
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          ya um thanks....lol....but i am fine as is, being alone is fine it sucks right now but it takes getting used to being lonely to appreciate someone's company....NO worries here.

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