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once were dinosaurs...



blood flows warm
in shallow streams

where feathered dreams

pierce the sky
on wings of
evolution

no longer bound
to the ground
by scales



















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Prompt:

DO BIRDS DREAM (Image by:; mirabiliaimages)

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  • Naridill gold member
    November 13
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    This short snippets of rhyme and imagery, I think it tore together beautifully moving!

  • MoonlightStars gold member
    November 11
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    Great work. I love poems that tell stories. good luck!


  • just mercedes gold member
    November 6

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    Nice look at the dinosaurs to birds evolution - scales to feathers, cold blood to warm - of course birds must dream! Good luck in the contest.