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Jealousy

It attacks you.
Grips you by the throat,
Pulls you down
Into a spiraling pit
Of emptiness,
Unimportance.
It catches you
By surprise.
You never see it coming,
And its caused by
The most unexpected people.
The ones you love most.

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  • Lizzie-Moffat
    November 6

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    What a perfect explanation of jealousy. This should be published in Oxford Dictionary. It'd be the most valid definition