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Portrait of a Tear

As thine eye fell upon mine,
How I enraptured thee by my wicked art
Cast within a portrait of a tear
Which thou didst drink in my desire. 

Didst my spell enthrall madness
As thou searched mine eye
Lovingly captured in azure immortal
Endangering thee over time. 

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  • Desire gold member
    November 6

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    Wow~

    Love Your weaving of words for You Captivate and
    Intrigue and the senses
    Sweet as sugar You melt the Mind~
    For some reason I am thirsty...
    and it is ALL Your fault
    Happy to see Your quill shaking Beautiful~
    Wooo Hoooo
    I had to give mine CPR

    Keep that quill dancing
    Thank You for sharing Your Voice
    Best wishes in all You do~
    with love & light~ Desire~*~