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fix me?

tell me you love me just one more time,
doesn't feel real at the moment,
feels like i'm living in a dream.

its a good thing you can't see me,
because i'm crying.
super hard.
bc it feels good to hear those words again.

i dream of what we could be,
make it like it was before,
make me smile and twirl me,
make the tears stop.

you could kiss me in the rain,
make me scream,
and never let me go..

but you wont let me in the door,
make me feel like a child,
lost at sea.

i'm alone,
and its not ok..
i wish i could be strong but
i'm just to weak to move on.
but the hate inside wont leave..

everyone who has hurt me,
everyone who has hurt me,
everyone who has hurt me,
no one can fix me.
no one can fix me.
can you fix me?

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