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The thing is....

No one knows that I've I been crying,
Not that they pay attention...
The good thing about the internet is,
No one can tell,
You can hide behind the emotions.
Everyone takes everyone for granted
That they feeling of what they say.
With a few smileys here,
And a couple of chirpy notes here,
Everything is hidden.
No one knows of what you're going to do,
You could jump off a bridge and no one would notice.
What happened to good old talking where friends can see what's wrong?

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  • Raida Boy94
    November 7

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    This an amazing piece Sarah and when I was depressed I would do just that hide my emotions from people. I hope you don't continue that 'cause trust me it just screws you up even worse.


  • Gauravrulz
    November 6

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    awesome and true sarah........but i wish and pray u dont hide ur emotions online and i pray u remain happy 4ever....keeep posting cutie


  • Sector-Hunter silver member
    November 5

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    You are so right here. It is so hard to talk to someone in person anymore. When you find someone on the net that will just let you talk you flow, but they cant really see you. You can hide your face and feelings from the world. I am glad you dont hide yours. Great work SH