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Dirty Love~ <3

I love him,
He loves me!!
He likes my style,
My plain beauty~!

He likes the word yes,
I say it all the time!
He likes to touch my breasts,
He likes it when I rhyme!!

He is so fucking cool~
We play now ev-ery night~!
He is so a-may-zing!
He likes to fucking bite~!

He kissed my lips,
And pulled my hair!
He held my hips,
And touched me- there!

This dirty love,
I can't get away!
I love this shit,
I love to fucking play!!

I love him,
He loves me!!
He likes my style,
My plain beauty~!

And then the pants unzip,
And I can't help but stare!
And then it fucking slips,
As if I'm not aware!

If I just follow his rules,
It will end with delight!
We started in the spring,
And it still goes on tonight!

And this I must confess,
It's like a fucking crime!
It's like you'd never guess,
We do it all the time!

It's like I'm so beloved,
I dream of it everyday!
I love all this shit,
Oh hell, what can I say?

I love him,
He loves me!!
He likes my style,
My plain b-e-a-u-ty~!

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  • Massacringchainsaw
    November 15
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    wow is the first thing that comes to mind it sounds like you really get it on but i do like the poem and i am not the greatest at ryhiming but i think you did a pretty damn fine job ryhming all that together


    • Kia-Ruko
      November 15
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      Thank you!!!

      I love rhyming my poems, thank you for commenting and positively too~ ^^

  • Last Hope
    November 7

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    Its Good!

    Super talented man, really. the Ryhmes are really great. keep it up!


    • Kia-Ruko
      November 10
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      <3<3 THANK YOU!! <3<3

      OMG THANK YOU!!! ^////^ He he he~