See me, gaze at me
Whisper kindness and you値l feel me
Take me and bring comfort
And know you値l get a smile
I am who I am
Even though it痴 a mystery
A complex mind maybe hard to understand
But everyone has a needy heart
Taking each of your assertions well
I bead each part upon the stars
Meanwhile I gaze on all of them
Realizing you can稚 satisfy each one
Therefore I look toward my soul
In search of the lost initiative
To finally express myself
To someone with an ear
Looking at a dove in the eastern sky
In peace one day I値l heal
Meanwhile in a contemporary world
I let the tides of disputation pass through me
For now I値l look to truth again
In search of the lost initiative
One day I hope to find
The place I was created for
A contest entry
- Just make it amazing! by X.brokenlover.X.
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For now I’ll look to truth again
In search of the lost initiative
One day I hope to find
The place I was created for.
BRILLIANT WRITE! I loved every bit of it but I especially loved the last stanza. You did a marvelous job on this, good luck in your contest and in all you do!
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