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Shattered Gkass

Shattered glass, broken,
unspoken pain scattered
Sharp harsh edges pierce the flesh
tears red,sorrow, a hopeful soul
A lost, innocent child
fights to be heard and found
A destiny in disarray
Slowing pace, silent screams
Distraut mind missplaced sunshine
shattered glass, broken
happiness, smille, laughter. What is this?
scars some visible,most  hidden
A so called life, unknown future
dreams to big,unseen, not yet born,
shattered glass, not yet a throw away.

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  • You've got a few words spelled wrong but other than that this is an amazing write, and I think the background you chose goes really well with it. Thanks for sharing this here and good luck in all you do.


    • alee25 gold member
      November 6
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      Thank you for taking the time to read my poen. Also letting me know about the spelling errors(I think I fixed them) take care and have a beautiful day .