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With You On My Mind




  I
  rearranged stars
  making them,
                            your rainbow




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picture inspiration;
http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Item/5857/207.jpg?1257472054

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  • songstress80
    November 20
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    so very beautiful. a lovely piece and great take on the picture prompt. rearrangeing stars to create a rainbow is a great image thought. i also love your choice on the background for this piece. it is kind of like the before part to the after which is the picture prompt. nicely done! keep up the good work!


  • Naughtygrlred
    November 6
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    really...i wish that were so...sometimes your words are so touching.


  • JinSays gold member
    November 6
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    wow.

    that's it.

    love,
    jin