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Translucent Memories

I refuse to believe, it was only a dream
Such love and pain must be true
An entity so sweet and pure
That haunts my troubled footsteps still
A wraith disguised as my very heart
It taunts the passing beauties
Again i see a pure white shadow
Of the person i used to be
Fallow me along the road
Of these translucent memories

Author notes

translucent memories, i guess for me, would be those i wish didnt exist. hope you enjoy.

A contest entry

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  • Beautiful-N-Broken silver member
    November 5
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    I really love the last 4 lines, you did a very nice job with this. I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much for taking the time to enter my contest and good luck hun!