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Three little words

He enters the room
My heart is a-flutter
One quick smile at me
And I melt like butter

What is this called
Is it love or lust
Will it stand through time,
Or blow away like dust

I hope it is love
And that it will stand
The test of time
Because he is the man

I’ve been waiting
For oh, so long
For a man like him
To come along

And every time
Those words he utters
It makes my heart
Start to stutter

I love you
Said so soft and sweet
It makes my heart
Skip a beat

I hope for us that
Forever more
Love will be
What is in store

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 7

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    The rhyming in this seems a little forced however it holds a deep message of love, desire and passion; something we all long for in life and when it is found we all melt like butter

    I hope you enjoy AllPoetry and continue to share your words with us

    Stay safe
    ~Manda
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  • Daedelus92
    November 5
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    Good Poem

    I really liked it. It had a good message.