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The Music of the Bowstring

The music of the bowstring

is rarely heard today,

not often does the bow sing

as in an olden day.

 

Not often does the bow sing

nor the arrow take its flight,

The music of the bowstring

has faded with the knight.

 

The music of the bowstring,

though armies it surpassed,

not often now the bow sings

since it's gone into the past.

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  • Eusebius
    November 18
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    This is very, very excellent, indeed! fine, very fine rhyme and meter throughout... I liked this a great deal! Oh, yes! I have some suggestions....