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The Sea of Incandescence

Missing image
Confluence of incandescent souls
transcend stars’ brilliance.

A contest entry

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  • Night Hope gold member
    2 days ago
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    I've already acknowledged this miniature feast of words, my Friend. Congratulations on winning the gold trophy with this one, Sweetie. Good luck in the contest, Poet.



    • mgmc gold member
      1 day ago
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      Thanks for comment and for great word learned from your poem.


  • songstress80
    November 20
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    much congrats on your gold trophy win!!!
    oh such beautiful imagery here. a lovely take on your picture prompt and the use of only seven words. a masterpiece of brilliance. i just had to add you as a favorite. i must continue to see such beautiful poetry in motion. the words that you used are just as colorful as the picture itself. i can actually see for myself the spirits of souls making their way through to get to their rightful place in Heaven.
    keep up the great imagery and beautiful work! i will keep my eyes on you...lol

    ;0)


  • Blue-Rose Beauty gold member
    November 18
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    Oooh. So very pretty, I loved the pictures and the words to match. I think the title could have been a little more original and I had to look one or two words up. The words flow very nice together. Thanks for entering.

    5.8/10

    - Blue beauty


  • islekine gold member
    November 8

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    Zowie!

    I am going to have to read more of your poems...I do like your style!
    Thanks for sharing!
    Best wishes in the contest and always!
    Write on and on...

    and


    Congrats on the Gold!
    Can I "snitch" your picture?


    • mgmc gold member
      November 8
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      Thanks for wonderful comment! Picture is from contest but snitch away!

      Marlene

  • Macsword
    November 8

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    And BAM!

    Excellent poet. Contest host apparently thought so too. Congrats on the Gold.


  • penman gold member
    November 7

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    Wonderful

    incredible word choice and such a great picture. Congrats on the gold


  • marandah gold member
    November 7

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    My word!

    You nailed this one!

    It's as though you crawled right inside the pic and found an answer!

  • Pogo7747
    November 6

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    Well done. Deserving of gold. Such emotion in such a short statement.

  • reveller silver member
    November 6

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    What a

    Pretty picture, and you summed it up so perfectly, no wonder you won gold for this gem.


  • Rick Weston silver member
    November 6

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    a good seven words and a lovely image shared.


  • Night Hope gold member
    November 5
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    Congratulations on winning the gold, Marlene.

    • mgmc gold member
      November 6
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      Thanks--I've added another word to my list of favorites - confluence--from your poem (a great word!). Thank you for inspiration!!!

      Marlene

  • UnbreakableSoul gold member
    November 5

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    This is so beautifully written!
    Congratulations on the gold Mgmc!

    Geneva


    • mgmc gold member
      November 6
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      Thank you very much for gold Geneva. Outstanding prompt and great contest!

      Marlene

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