Falling is not failing
Walking through the fires
we should rise above the
the smoke and trodden ash
To make way for a proven path
that leads us to our over pass
that bridge between the light and night
As we linger here in the twilight.
Author notes
Far edged free verse
Prompt:
http://allpoetry.com/poem/5384205
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rise above the smoke and trodden ash................I like that line in this one for some reason....the last one as well.....................great work as usual in such a few lines............
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Twilight lingering..what a beautiful image this poem conjures... lovely poem, gentle voice.
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Thank you for reading and commenting on me
All the best to you,
Sincerely,
Cheryl
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Right on sister you tell them what we need to know.. for this is awesome insight and words for the soul well penned I have you in my prayers and hope each day God smiles and sends his healing had to say dont worry everything will be ok... much love always Angel♥
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hey that's awesome I loved it!!!
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Thank You, Kevin
Your awesome my Rockin Friend!
Cyber hugs,
Cheryl
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Well done. I enjoyed this one.
Mike
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Thank You Mike,
For reading and commenting on me .
It means alot coming from my favorite poet.
I am honored.
Sincerely,
Cheryl
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