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Tragedy of Judas

The kiss of my betrayal
Assassinated mine own heart
The kiss of betrayal I gave my lord
Dismantled the Grand Canyon of my soul.

I should have never given that traitorous kiss
And my life wouldn't have been in total darkness
My eyes wouldn't have been too misted
  with mine own precious blood.

If only I didn't give that kiss
I wouldn't have been ripped
  by the claws of Death.

And no theater would be playing
  the Tragedy of Judas.

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    November 7

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    Oh my

    This is a very deep poem and one of mystery and saddness . If the word used most often if only I didnt kiss the kiss of betrayal . very good write here


  • XMysticalNightmareX
    November 6
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    very well done thanks for entering the contest and good luck!