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Just a Dream

Please do not leave me alone tonight
Let me stay in your warm embrace.
There is no more strength left in me
To keep me from being a disgrace.
So please be there and let me see
Alone is not a word meant for me.



I heard you and I see you
Laughing and smiling all the time.
I want you and I need you
More than I could ever understand.
This hurts to know and to feel
You are not something I want to let go.



Touch me, hold me, kiss me, love me
Let me feel before I enter my grave.
Abuse me, hit me, torture me, kill me
I do not care what you do as long as it is you.
This confusing feeling is like a curse
For when I am not with you everything gets worse.



I want you to hold me
I want you to love me.
I need you to comfort me
I need you to be with me
But I know this can not be.
For you have always been...



Just a dream

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  • JT Sammer
    November 17
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    Excellent write, your doing amazing on your poetry. Keep up the hard work! Seriously, it's amazing.

    Peace & Love

    ~J


  • Disguising Mask
    November 15

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    great write

    this poem really relates to some relation issues im goin through right now and it really hit home...keep up the writing...awesome job...


  • Pandoras-Box555
    November 15

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    Great work. I love how you wrap it up with that last line. It's perfect

  • you never really wanna leave a dream, why is that even when you have a good life, you never wanna wake up, even if the dream is laying right next to you. it allows you peace and something that without it you can't find, funny huh, keep it flowing