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Nightmare Awaits

A crimson Milky Way spinning inside your eyes
The vortex expands
Malicious intentions dragging us in
Into that well known nightmare of us
Among stars adorned with blood
Locked together in hatred, united in pain
The scornful gleam of distant galaxies
Floating weightless through eons of haunted cries
Nightmare await this eternity  

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  • ArchCarXxx
    November 21
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    Like this poem! But i love this line the most:Among stars adorned with blood. Good job and a Great Write! ^_^