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pigment

crush the ripe fruit
and it's colour
will seep
down your knuckles
like blood
and your
black and white world
will become vivid
and once you taste that
sweet nectar
and see that brilliant color
there's no going back

...tada...

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  • Demington
    November 7
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    Wow, kind of dark and kind of curious (maybe even kind of hopeful).

    I like it.


  • Mr.
    November 6
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    i like it


  • The Drifter
    November 6

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    The has to be color in one's life or life is so ho hum, so very dull. There are times when black and white rule but most of the timewe have to have color to stimulated the senses, how would a black and white orange taste or an apple? The color intices the taste buds through vision of the colors and the smell. How would a black and white rose smell?? Thank you for sharing.


  • LightOfDawn
    November 6
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    Ooo....colorful!


  • UncleDunk gold member
    November 6
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    The starkness of black and white
    overlayed in blood
    bright colors, joy reflected
    from ancient mud


  • AmazinJason
    November 6
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    yummy

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