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~♥Sherbert Love♥~

Sherbert, Sherbert,
Deliciously sweet.
Gulping down,
As fast as I can eat.
One little taste,
Makes me want more.
Sherbert, Sherbert,
I absolutely adore.
It leaves me content,
And completely at peace.
My love for Sherbert,
Won't ever cease.
Read between the lines,
If you are smart.
I don't just half-ass love,
I love with my whole heart!

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~READ BETWEEN THE LINES~ Sherbert drives me insane in a good way. Cannot get Sherbert off my mind. What it would be like ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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  • WorstDaysOfMyLife..
    November 8

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    Oh YEAH!!
    I think I might of got the message
    I totally agree I always love with everything I have got!
    It's a REALLY good poem!
    I absolutly love it.
    You are sooo good at making your poems flow easily
    && ur also a really good rhymerr lols unlike myself
    Thanks again
    Bekkie

  • The Devil18
    November 6
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    oh this is so good


  • KissMeCauseImCrazy
    November 5

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    What is sherbert? hahaha. I don't even know...and it frustrates me.
    ...seriously who is Sherbert....I'm nosy

    But, of course, your nonsense made me giggle!!!

    Much LOVE and many, many, many hugs nugget!!
    Taylor.


    • fallendust
      November 5
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      love you sis!!!!


    • fallendust
      November 5
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      OMG FINALLY you are the FIRST person to nail this poem!!! Thank you so much sis....I was startin to get frustrated lmao.....you nailed it when you said "WHO is sherbert!!!" Yes the sherbert is me refering to a special someone who shall remain anonymous BUT I am sooooo very proud of you for getting my poem!!!! Thanks for reading my special poptart!!!
      Sincerely,
      Sarah


  • LostLifeLame
    November 5

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    lmao... i love how it goes from, a poem about sherbert to, a poem about loving with your whole heart. It also confuses me in many ways lol. Loved it!


    • fallendust
      November 5
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      The funny thing is is that it is not about Sherbert at all lmao. I knew this one would confuse people. The Sherbert represents someone lol Thank you for reading and commenting hun!!! I love me Besty!!!


      • LostLifeLame
        November 5
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        I thought of that but wasn't sure b/c.. i am... um not myself lol.. i'll explain later if u want me to lol.


  • Angel-of-Chaos
    November 5
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    haha I love sherbert! I didn't when I was young though. Good write it has made me hungry for some ice cream haha

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