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[ My mind is bleeding ]

My mind is bleeding
oozing a self inflicted insanity
All i hear is your voice
a worthless calling
Corruption reigns there
deep inside my head
a king for me
a broken marionette

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  • savemysoul
    November 10
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    sad, it was good though. a little short, but you left us wanting more. nice job. thanks for entering and good luck.

    -- jordan.