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the way to live in--------------

Nightlong viewing of television
with hair splitting
and nerve breaking
anecdotes
really made me sick.
I have no sleep at all
and all my faculties
that assist the brain
went Idle

After viewing this
small instrument fitted
in the glass cabinet
made my day enthusiastic,
because without a break
this is running continuously
without a break
thus professing me the way to live in
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  • Mango Memories gold member
    November 10
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    bravo!


  • amnouup
    November 8
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    Inspiring

    Its an encouraging write with nice example, enjoyed reading this :-)