My eyes are in need of thread
My nose is barely hanging on
Industrial tape holds my ear to my head
I get tossed around
And im slowly breaking apart
My heart is shattered and torn
My soul?
HA!
what soul?
People pass me round and round
They think they can fix me
But they are just hurting me instead
They sew my eyes back on
But my leg falls off
My heart is put back together
But the ta[e doesnt last very long
When relity sets in
Im thrown to the curb like nothing
i Cant be fixed
I need to be cherished
Loved for what i am
Broken and all
Dont toss me
But hold me
Dont yell
But speak softly
Im not a project
im a friend
I listen very well
But i dont give advice
I am who i am
Broken
And i dont want to be fixed
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how did i do? honesty please -.-
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oh wow...hits me so hard...I feel the same...wonderful poem
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Since you will hide me, ill hold you...
And I wont let go...
Promise.
Beautifull poem...
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i can relate
people try to fix me all the time its so messd up because i kinda like who i am even if i do have flaws -
Beautiful Poem, Very Touching, Deep And AWESOMELY AMAZING!!!
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deep
hey i kind know where your coming from...i feel the same way sometimes..hope you find the one that truly cares...
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Mutual
brilliant, it's like you've written out my own emotions and thoughts, I love it!
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This was ans awesome poem and it's very touching. I really like this poem.
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Hmm.... I like it!! Never rely on other so fix you, or to bring you to where you need to be. You have to get there on your own, or it's all an illusion and will never last. Never give up wanting to be cherished and loved for what you are, it is a good goal! I really like the way in which you wrote this. The emotional expression is awesome, the reader feels as though they know you... Great job, I love it!
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wow
there is some strong emotion in this one, but thats what makes it sooo good. you deserve someone who truly cares for you and you'll find them eventually, dont give up looking. i like it, keep writing.
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i can relate
people try to fix me all the time its messd up because i kinda like who i am -
this is great.
its saying "hey waht if i really dont want you to fix me, what if i like who i am and i dont want to change that." i think
well either way its really good!
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cool
nice Im broken.....but WHO can fix me tho? -
this is awsome you have some real talent
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sorry for my spelling errors, i did this in lik 5 minutes :
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