Sight unseen,
she's the queen of my nighttime,
the only one to rule my mind.
Of all I've seen,
she's the most unclean;
Narcissistic
and flying high.
Live for today
forget about tomorrow.
Sight unseen,
she's the queen of my nighttime,
the only one to rule my mind.
As to time immemorial
so is she to the memories of my lifetime.
All the good looking ones
sifted through rose colored glasses;
Losing touch with the others.
Sight unseen,
she's the queen of my nighttime,
the only one to rule my mind.
Going all the way, under the covers
we used to be some kind of lovers;
Going all the way, under the covers
we used to be some kind of lovers;
When I'm down
and feeling hollow.
Dreams they say
something to follow.
Love, love
I'd really like it mellow;
Seems I've been breathing kind of shallow.
Live for today
forget about tomorrow.
As to time immemorial
so is she to the memories of my lifetime.
All the good looking ones
Sifted through rose colored glasses;
Losing touch with the others.
Sight unseen
she's the queen of my nighttime.
Going all the way, under the covers
we used to be some kind of lovers;
Going all the way, under the covers
we used to be some kind of lovers;
As to time immemorial
so is she to the memories of my lifetime.
All the good looking ones
sifted through rose colored glasses;
Losing touch with the others.
Sight unseen
she's the queen of my nighttime.
the only one to rule my mind.
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wowee Love the depth of this write and these lines that you repeated were superb!
Going all the way, under the covers
we used to be some kind of lovers;
Another flowing piece deep from inside your mind... Great work hun xx DD
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I guess that crazy mind of mine goes into some weird places.
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Great poem. Thnaks again for the read of you deep poems.
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Hello Brook,
Thank you so very much for reading and commenting on this piece.
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Through my rose-colored glasses I'll read this as some kind of forgiveness.
Oh, honey, tonight I do have some Prayers to say, but first I have to go thank a bunch of people for being complete geniuses. On a day with so much horrid news (yes, I Know it's existed everyday for longer than we think) these people nearly made me wee - so funny, witty, & Wise!
I Do so love reading your words, no matter where they seem to take me........
ya All~Ways,
~ Jan ~
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I know of the news you speak of and to think that the perp is one who swore to help others....
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Actually, there was quite a bit of evil flung in my face this week. A boy being severely burned for spite, a little girl being burned because of stupidity, a gang rape that took place for over 2 hours (I think the reporter said 2 1/2 or more), Fort Hood, and that's just the stuff I've heard about in the U.S. - sigh!
I am so grateful for the balance & harmony of things, even if it comes at a price - I can think of no finer system! -
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what about that poor girl that died in AZ because she became too western for her father who ran her over and then ran for his live to the UK?
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When you've had so much heaped on you, you either rise or sink. One or the other.
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Did not hear about that. There are parents who do cruel, stupid things everyday. They are allowed to procreate too. All I can do is try to remain + that though this b.s. does exist, it is so by far not the norm!
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