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Ocean Scented Pillow

Crash! Splash! Swish!
Can you hear the sea
Come and dance in the surf
Oh please dance with me!

Take off your shoes
And look up at the stars
Just fall upon the sand
And I will kiss your scars

Listen to the ocean
Breaking against the rocks
And we can race the wind
Along the rickety docks

Come lay with me
And rest your weary eyes
Lay on my ocean scented pillow
And let your emotions rise

Let your tears fall into the tide pools
And then hold me tight
Let your tears stay in the ocean
And just love me tonight

I don't know what you think but I really liked this one lol

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  • Unbreakable3
    November 6

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    i don't know which title you used becasue it doesn't say so in your Authors notes. and with over 700. titles i can't always remember everyone i have come up with. please go back and place the title and title number in the authors notes or i will disqualify this one! You have around 12 hours!