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ChelChel

I look into those BIG brown eyes
writings of my father run throughout his face
ability to hate a strand in his DNA

seems impossible for a precious boy

 to h i n d er from the innocence inside of him

Those BIG brown eyes have seen

more than me

He watches her S TRA IN

the fists uncontained

an everyday routine

its unavoidable

 

I cannot blame myself

I HAVE THE CHOICE

the CHOICE to stay away

I was too young

to take him away

so im forced to sit back and watch

his innocence fade

there is nothing to do

but to pray a n t i c i p a t i n g

for the future

 

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