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Will power to live your life..



Find your own person and identity,
Or be the same as everyone else.
Landmark your own judgements
Love people how you want to be loved
Obsession with your destiny
Would you give up your morals easily?

Young at heart; with music within your soul
Or with your shrivel up depressed and on the dole?
Uncomfortable with academic success?
Reality is much harsher than we think

Don't you agree that there should be lessons on living
Regular things from day to day that we take for granted..
Easing the guilt that burrows into your soul
Adventurous and want to explore the world
Maybe motherly; want to feel needed and special
So... will you follow the crowd and be your own person?

 

 

 

 

                      {it's your choice}

 

 

 

 

 









 

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  • Absolutely loved that ending. Wonderfully penned. You had me from the very first line. Thank you so much for entering my contest.


  • Aiswarya T Anish
    November 9

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    THIS IS GREAT.
    i love the way you write. i really agree with you. We should follow our willpower. We could do anything if we do so...Lovely write.