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crickets still around
though now they’re few in number
singing more slowly

A contest entry

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  • Shantti silver member
    1 day ago
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    OH I love this. The might sing slower as it gets colder.... lovely change of season ku..

    Thank you for enterning


  • amnouup
    November 10
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    Very natural

    Very natural ku
    best wishes,
    Mou


  • Tqop
    November 6

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    Well done.

    Very profound. The grasshopers are still around singing just not as loud. And I love the background and how it went well with the poem.

    TQOP


  • ZachP
    November 5

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    Kathleen, dear friend~
    an amazing haiku,
    and while this isn't a "photograph" of a moment, per se,
    it is a wonderful little snippet of poetic video

    thank you for sharing,
    and best of luck in the contest.
    Zach Estel
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  • UnbreakableSoul gold member
    November 5

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    Wow, this is a wonderful Haiku Kathleen!
    Your word choice falls into place beautifully!
    Good luck to you in the contest!

    Geneva

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