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earthen ash

we are stars in the sky
to shatter against the earth,
to observe our fallen moon
and dying Sun from dry shores
desperate in their angst to
end the suffering.



I am a molecule;
small, unfounded
and kept secure in a jar.


My voice is pretentious,
known only in the course of
the waves.





I know of fallen proposals
and the earthen ash
from which I came.

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  • Anubis
    November 7
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    Your talent as a writer is more impressed upon me as I read each piece of yours. Another job well done.