I am nothing in this world
I do not belong
I should be purged from this place
Heaven won't have me
So my soul will eternally burn as hatred consumes all
Author notes
I hope this is what you had in mind. Good luck Judging! 
Prompt Option 2
~into the fire~
A contest entry
- Quickie attempt. by CentrifugalCorpse.
1300 points, ended November 5, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think, your honest opinion.
Comments
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Great take on the prompt. Just don't ever give up writing for you have a great way with words. Pen on
ShaShay
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I don't like the use of the word "soul"; it feels cliche but I assure you that the poem is not. I think you meant to say "I am nothing in this world" in the first stanza. Saying "I am all but nothing" is like saying "I am everything" which contradicts with the second and third line in my opinion. I like the picture; it relates well to your wording and "into the fire" fits the sketch nicely. Thanks for entering and best of luck. Pen on.xx
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Very well done! GOod luck!
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