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[ An empty sailing ship ]

An empty sailing ship
forged of lust and broken hearts
treads water in a sea of tears
Every feeling just a ripple in the tide
To be pulled and pushed and left aside
Oh my captain where have you gone?
left unknowingly and so swiftly
maybe to a new ship
built of tougher things
Hate and a shell of passion
oh here I am my captain
broken now upon the rocks
filled now with my own debris

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