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Heaven and not nether (collab)

 

Eyes meet in warm, as lashes flicker
With tender kissing and warm embracing
they explore amour
loosing all in in that moment's stupor
Growth and understanding, wisdom,
envelope them as two mature beings
they grow some more
on their love's ecstatic shores
It's not about just lovemaking and lust
it is much more than average 'must'
but what the heart has in store
augmented on terrace of veins they pulse along.


To find the stars in the eyes of a lover
twinkling in evergrowing brightness
through the mists of sorrow
as it is dispersed and turned into complete bow
When storms rage wild you hold tight
in that heavenly embrace fixing that partner in loving sight
til the break of light brings tomorrow
you are my joy that I bought and did not mere borrow
Allowing the tears to drench your shirt
as mine fall on your bosom that is heaving in more than a flirt
for your shoulder is on borrow
and your bosom nestling in my chest..shall we lest!


It's a gift you find with another sweet soul
a soul that has merged and now in my unending bowl
a completion to you, Mi Amour
bearing the jealous,slighty world's boors,
Inner beauty that you learn over time
is warming us in a partnered picture mime
not just passion and sexual chores
as we rummage ,give and take each other's passion stores
but the promises of a lifetime of pleasure
this is our heaven and not a nether!


enjoying and living togtherness....moments slip by and we get bound more and more!

Author notes

sgking asked for a challenge. Asked me to send him 20 lines and I did so and he was to weave around each line..as he did..this is how it came about:

heaven and not a nether!

This is a collaboration poem with poetess PassionsPromise-the scheme reads as follows: poet sgking123 first line and alternate lines thereafter
Poetess PassionsPromise: second line and every alternate line thereafter

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  • cricketjeff gold member
    November 6

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    Very cleverly interwoven

    Yet another collaboration from the Queen of the art

    Love

    Jeff


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 6
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    two becoming one through verse, there is nothing better then tha, i loved this one, it was golden keep it flowing


  • sgking123
    November 6

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    a confirmation

    this is a confirmation of the beauty of challenge.....when unfinished twenty lines were sent to me....I was so gripped by their sheer beauty that I had no other option but to match the brilliance of PP and rest is as above........partnered satisfaction


  • azlyn gold member
    November 6

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    Beautiful...wonderful expressions of tenderness. Lovely collab.

    U...


  • Griswold gold member
    November 5

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    He asked for a challenge when there are two in the group he refused to address? Why didn't you just point him in that direction then? Give 'em the boot baby... Scott
    I love you sweetheart..


  • JohnnyD gold member
    November 5

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    Interesting, never seen this particular style before but it is intriguing, well done (AS ALWAYS HUH? )!

    loves ya Tory,



    lEN

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