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i should have jumped.

your words hit me,
with just as much force
as your average grenade.
and i realized i'd made a mistake.
but it's already too late,

with you so close to being gone.
all that's left to do is,

count the teardrops as they fall.

regret, cold and impossible to rewind,
breaks my heart, empties my mind.
now watch as all i have falls apart.
my happiness barely escaped my grasp,
i should have jumped when i had the chance.
maybe, it would have saved us all the pain.....

Author notes

what more is there to say?
why do i miss him when he wasn't mine?
why does it hurt so bad that he's leaving? my best friend is moving.
why didn't i learn my lesson the first time about people leaving?

i want the truth, be harsh. i deserve it.

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  • MasterFoxFang
    November 6

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    Damn

    wow this really sucks the words are just emotional and full of greif yeah it sucks loosing a friend when they arethe one doing the moving all i can say is damn nothing is wrong with this one hell of a job.