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Electricity



thunder cracks loudly
followed by bright lightning bolts
electricity



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  • Shantti silver member
    November 27
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    Very well done! Lightening storms scare me personally, I hate it when you can HEAR the electric lightening bolt as it strikes down.. Terrifies the hell out of me. Well done, you've captured this wonderfully. Thank you for entering


  • TheQueenOfPoetry
    November 6

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    Nice thoughts here. I love the idea of a nice thunder storm making the grass greener.

  • ea silver member
    November 6

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    good one, getting that electricity into the final five syllable line!