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Quenched

"The day has been so long and tiring,'
I tell you as we watch the TV.
So you take my hand and we walk together
as you utter, "Follow me."
We are in the bathroom;
the shower is being turned on.
while you lean in to kiss me
as I smile knowingly, I won't be showering alone.
Slowly we taste each other's desires
heating up and our clothes start to fall.
I step under the blissful water,
you pin me against the wall.
The days cares disappear with your toches
my mind races ahead from the steam
When you gently touch my wet underwear
my insides start to tremble and scream.
Take my all if you will my dear lover.
Give us both what our bodies desire
Let us quench our lusts in this moment.
See if the water will put out this fire.

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