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Mine and Yours

We all have a choice
we all have a time
We all have a wrong
And we all have a right

The out come of life
The outcome of love
Depends on your choice
With no help from above

Its all up to you
the choice that you make
it can be anything
any time, any way

Should i go?
Do i stay?
Am i right?
Is this the way?

Sometimes you get help
to make certain choices
sometime you decide
You use your own voices

No matter how,
no matter when
youll always make choices
again, and again

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  • Diminished Capacity gold member
    November 17, 2009

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    Wonderful take on the prompt. Loved the slight rhyme scheme in this, it gave it some flavor. Great job, thank you so much for entering my contest.


  • Beautiful-N-Broken silver member
    November 5, 2009

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    This is so true. Choices are always there in everything you do and you have to live with the choices you make. Oh gee, I sound like a George Jones song....Anyways, good write and keep on writing!


  • Stickboy gold member
    November 5, 2009

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    I do believe in free will and your poem says it all best of luck in the contest
    Sean